Well,… instincts like that either come from trying to stop the child from crying or having to fight a sabertooth tiger for its survival… good luck

Nice

Vanished

*u*

Is that y u stopped writing the story? It’s been 5 months since I last uploaded

Is there romance? Is he a “villain”? Explain

So I’ve read till basically chapter 50 where it becomes paid to read, and I’ve noticed the tag of villain and antihero in the same sequence… Whats that about? So is he a villain or an antihero? As I’ve read I’ve seen his… let’s say lacksadaddle approach to those he… emotionally favours. If he was going to be weak like that, why put the villain tag? I’d understand it if it just was the antihero tag, since those types always need someone by their side and can’t thrive on their own due to their mental weakness, but a villain? They thrive on their own, doing WHATEVER it takes to get what they want, let’s just say that when I saw the villain tag, I had half the mind to expect the Mc to play and manipulate everyone to the best of his abilities and do whatever it takes for power. Now I’m writing this because I’ve reached the paid chapters, and the reason for the free chapters is to hook and engage the readers enough so that they may pay for the paid chapters, but from what I’ve seen so far in the free chapters, the villain tag isn’t in play much. From what I’ve seen in other TRUE villain titles, in their free chapters we can clearly see that the villain title isn’t just for show and is true, and if I’m to compare it to what ive seen so far… it’s like comparing doing a surgery on a dead ant to doing a surgery on a alive human that isn’t on anesthesia and can feel every single morsel of pain that is being inflicted upon it and is also being mentally tortured by seeing his family also get brutally tortured at the same time. You see, the difference is just that staggering, but if in the paid chapters he changes, may you tell me here? Because I am truly contemplating whether to pay for the paid chapters because of my interest, or stop reading because of my dissatisfaction with the lack of villainess behaviour and instead of weak behaviour he is exhibiting towards those he favours, which shouldn’t even exist or happen due to the tag of him being a villain.

It is a wonderful read. There are no mistakes of any kind in its visage towards the readers. The world and characters are great and flushed out, as if they are truly doing what suits them best in a possible ways, though there’s this 1 annoying, insistent bitch who I would love to condemn to a fate worse than death due to her fucking annoyness. Other than that it’s great. (Hate her, don’t like her, I would describe what I would do to her to quell my negative feelings, but I think I would like for this review to be taken as a review, instead of a torture plan.)

His not hiss

Shot not shots

Mistake here

There instead of they

Did u fix most of the Grammy and spelling mistakes? I’ve been reading and I’ve encountered lots of them in the past. Is your writing good enough for there to not be anymore mistakes of that sort?

Great chapter! Keep it up

Mistake here, do u mean to say feeling or what u wrote aeelings

Great chapter!