Lady_Comet

Oh so it's like a truffle hunting pig. Most truffle hunters use dogs now because pigs have a tendency to eat the tasty truffles. Although, I'm not really sure how tasty a truffle is as I've only ever had it as an ingredient. It might be like vegemite, kind of awful by itself but used in the right amount as part of complete dish tasty enough.

The "evil fire," you say? Be careful what you eat and drink.

Synonyms would probably make this part sound better. Choose one with a slightly different connotation. Maybe use something like, "suppressed her excitement and joy.."

It should be her sister. There seems to be some sort of translation mix-up, in many of the stories on this app, arising from cultural differences in how family relations are defined.

The ice had disappeared over time because of a "corrosive effect" from the blood it was covering? okayyy, wouldn't ice just I don't know melt over time? I mean sure maybe her super power also grants her ice a never melting property. But, it's never been mentioned. And if the blood is corrosive why didn't eat through the metal it's splattered on? Whatever it just a minor "eh? that's weird," compared to other things.

Isn't she a space powered person? Didn't she pull a car out a fee chapters back?

found a tiger running a lunch restaurant. Now the hunter became some forest creatures mud soup and his hair was weaved into a small change purse embroidered with the restaurant's logo as a free advertising gimmick. ☆☆ Maybe some day an editor will come back through and fix this abrupt chapter ending. I mean there are cliffhangers, there is the ending to Sparanos, and

... Mint plants are a curse on gardens. Or maybe they are the only things I can grow. 🤔😅 Once had a garden of many things tasty. Soon only mint left growing tall Once, tasty, ruined in overabundance.

That's a good description of most children.

??? When he was telling her about the villagers traveling to town twice a month he said he would accompany her. Why is he now staying at home?