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I read the previous version of this novel which author dropped, tbh I also really liked that one and just waited months for it to update, I eventually found this one which is remake and takes a different path than the previous one. Writing Quality: Pleasant- Very few grammar mistakes and a good level of dialogue Update stability: 1 chapter per 2/3 days, hope it is upgraded to 1/day soon Story development: For transmigration MC has to fix an appointment with truck-kun😂, he could even reject being transmigrated, the starting is common among transmigration novels, using future knowledge and getting stronger, he transmigrated in his own novel but there are many more things even he doesn't know, adding more mystery to it rather than an all knowing MC who just solves all the problems as they come by. Read till the latest chapter which is 30, so there isn't much story development yet. This novel has a lot of potential and I know author is going to make use of it. Character Design: Our MC isn't perfectly defined till now but I still don't find any negative points in him. The conversations are a bit dull or bland as I would call it, It would be better if it the conversations were more lively with his maid, brothers and elders. World background: Author has kept world background mysteries but it isn't a problem as he doesn't mention those things often and gives the new info at right time. It would be better if author used much more simple and also detailed power system most novels are these days are using. It's a good novel with a lot of potential, I just hope the updates are frequent to keep me hooked to this, definitely give it a try.
I dropped the novel even before MC got reincarnated😌. Author has written this novel like how we write our essays, expanding the sentences to fit the word limit. Unnecessary elaboration of their expressions in simple conversations. It isn't about grammar or anything, the novel is straight up boring when reading like this, even the yandere tag could only take me to as far as chapter 5. If not for yandere, I would have dropped after chapter 1. Dense MC, Cliche plot, insensitive mother, the novel already gives vibes that the character's IQ will be dropped further. I won't waste my time on this, when this site has much better novels for me to read.
I wanted to give zero stars but there wasn't an option for it. Rebecca is the worst character ever, she comes out of nowhere and ruins this whole novel. The other heroines are fine but MC seems like a desperate loser trying to win dates over her because she's beautiful, she's got the most sh*ttiest personality ever which author thinks is great thing. After her appearance the novel is just frustrating to read. MC is no different than pokemon collecter, he has to add every beautiful girl in his harem regardless of their personality, Not recommended if you don't want to read a passive mc or simp mc
It's an entertaining novel, grammar and spelling mistakes are common but you can still enjoy it, although at first sight it looks like a third rate novel written with poor writing skills but this is still one of the novels I enjoyed the most. The Villain(MCs) and heroines personalities and character development are amazing and are developing with the plot. The relationships are balanced, MC has good self control, he treats heroines fairly and the heroines also do the same, unlike other novels where MC has use various cheap tricks to win over NPC heroines. The plot also gets better with time. Although it's not one of a kind or something but it is funny, enjoyable and a bit of wholesome. Praise the dog author. Definitely give a read till 30 chapters