Janis_Jeplin

Honestly, I understand the protagonist’s childish behavior; that is, we’re told from the start that he merges with a spoiled noble, and I like the stark contrast between the two personalities, though I would like to see more of that explained. But the story is still in its early stages, and the author has time to develop everything. Keep up the good work!

All I can say is... IT'S BACK, YES! I'm so, so happy. It's one of my favorite novels on the site, and I was really worried when days went by and there were no new chapters.

I had never tried a romance novel before, that is, one where there is only one love interest and the relationship is in its early stages, but I have to say that I really like how the couple develops. I find myself smiling like an aunt every time I read a chapter. The action also develops very well; you won't get sick of pure romance. The main character is OP, but he has his difficulties. In short, it's a very good novel.

Don't say that! Everything is usually difficult at first, but if you develop your own style, you will attract readers who like it and you won't feel the need to change the way you write. Start it as a hobby and don't overthink it. Comments are usually constructive and offer suggestions, but you don't have to take them on board. You can experiment with your story however you want — after all, it's your work! For example, you could give the main character a split personality. Alternatively, they could have made friends who were all killed by a mad scientist, or they could simply be emotional because you like that kind of protagonist. If the story develops well, these things can be overlooked. Anyway, I just want to say that you shouldn't get frustrated. Be happy!

I like that it's not about transmigration. While the tragic past is interesting, I have a problem with the main character's personality. I mean that he is very emotional for someone who grew up with a mad scientist. Furthermore, since he exterminated the entire place, I don't think he had any relationships with other beings, so his personality would have developed similarly to that of a robot.

To be honest, I wasn't expecting the beginning; it scared me. 10/10. However, I have my doubts about the relationship between Evelyn and Lucian — they literally just met, and the next day they were already best friends!

I don't like the rabbit. I think the comic relief is unnecessary. Likewise, I would also have liked the MC to be slightly more evil. Everything else is fine.

I'm surprised it wasn't a rebirth (bonus points for that), I like the MC (I'm tired of weak MCs in the beginning), the story development feels good, but I would have liked more context, like the continents or if there are more intelligent races, etc. Good job!

This sounds very suspicious.

I love it, it's a supermega gem, I already had faith in the author because of his previous work, but I feel like this book shows something completely different; all the characters feel alive, the mc is excellent, and the world building is interesting.