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Too many words to say i can't put them all, but I'll say the most important one, this is the best novel i have ever read. Okay damn it we're doing this. One notable thing is the vocabulary, a lot of times i see words i don't even know about and I'm forced to check the dictionary thereby learning a new word each time. Second is the phenomenal piece of writing, this writing is beyond what I ever thought possible, from the start all could do was mouth "wow" countless times before I got used to it, the the intricate details speaks of how knowledgeable the writer must be to be able to create this masterpiece. I have read fantasy, wuxia, and many more, but they can't compare to this, the perfect setting also says a lot, a lot of football are unaware of many DRC footballers, if you ask me i can't even name one, so i think the setting was perfect, from rags to fame. I am currently at 385, and i just said i can't keep all this thoughts to myself any longer, the journey is smooth the writer makes sure not to make mistakes. Having a system does not guarantee talent, so he devoted himself into training like a madman that even a critic like me actually commends him without thinking of the system, and that was not how I thought at first but his efforts changed my view. I'm also trying to be a writer, so reading this book also helps me in many ways. I already wrote a full chapter 🙆 (this last comment might be biased but, personally and because of my habit to focus on only myself i was kind of drawn to Zachary more when I figured he was also a guy to forget everything else and focus on training, so i was kind of shocked and unhappy when he started Camila especially after what I thought was going to be a 'ONS'. Having a girl is okay though, i have no worries it just kinda annoys me a little especially when he acts roleplay😩

Interesting at first but for this took a 360 when he developed the habit of laying every woman he comes across, even his own mother, coupled with the fact that you will never let him lose a fight. I stopped reading when you made him send his soldiers to conquer all the worlds, and we know we'll enough that he is not even stronger than the Overlord and Warden combined so why haven't they gone and conquer all the worlds, that thing is unrealistic for me, an where you F'd up was when you said "when you get to earth enslave all the men and capture the women."

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Nope...they die, Suzan gets depressed, the kid gets guilty conscience and innu gets angry, then Gary gets angry then the howlers gets angry.....I swear if even one of those kids survive.... idk but it's looks impossible and I hope it is

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