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I just have one simple question. Why would Jon accept being called a lord? I mean he is King. Not of Westeros but of Artic but a King still. His designation demands that. You dont call a Prince or King a lord. Thats like breaking all kinds of rules of etiquette and a grave insult to the foreign monarch.
A very good update after a long wait. On that note, I can clearly see that you have a very busy schedule hence you cant work on it frequently, might suggest handing this project over to some other competent writer who this fanfic writing as their fulltime job. I would hate to forget the context of the story after waiting for another 2 or 3 months for update and then have to read from the start to understand it.
by the hands of the women of your family at that.
So, lot of reader are getting freaked out with this paragraph but I can their cultural difference. Here in parts of asia particularly India every Elder girl is referred as Big sister and Elder guy as Big Brother and it really is not weird handing some toffees/candies/lolipops to kids. Its a simple gesture which elders do to kids to make them happy and that brings smile on their faces as well. Its a special feeling of accomplishment by having a contribution in making a child's day a brighter.
may I have the name of the book?
Bro..do something about the spelling and grammar. Like seriously, its feels like Class 2 kids could write in better English than you. Also, might I suggest that you write this in Hindi, not in the Devnargri script but something like - "Bhai Hindi mein likh le, kyu faltu mein English ki gand maar raha hai aur humari english ki bhi watt laga raha hai?"
Is there any English version of your story? Can you please provide link if there is?
So the english speaking families need to learn manners of expressing respect to relations in way of addressing those relations. And you wonder why asians look at westerners and think them as illiterate uncultered morons...
Shows that you trully had a very dull childhood. you have my pity.
NOT SWASTIKA YOU WESTERNER LACKWIT!!! IT IS HAKEN KRUZ OR AS THE ANGLES CALLED IT THE HOOKED CROSS. NOT SWASTIKA NEVER SWASTIKA.
Dude.. I got few things cleared up now. 1. You are single. 2. Never been in one or had a stable relationship3. If by few good deeds of your past lives brought you a girl in this life. You behaved as Peter in this story and your break up was melodramatic and cringe too.