cluelessauthor

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I hope the story isn't dead, I really enjoyed the progress and how there is a reason for a 'dark avatar'

this story is a true gem with excellent dynamic characters and an incredible plot. I can't wait to see what act two has in store. 10,000% worth the read

Ygrette walked over to the Tormund and whispered "What's a zombie?" Tormund let out a laugh, "no clue. Let's find out"!

man that was one hell of a cliffhanger 😮‍💨

I don't need you, you forgot the word need in this paragraph

the second behind him is redundant, if he look behind himself the scenery he sees could only be within his line of sight. loving the story, just a small thing here

Building, not Nuilding.

loved this little twist, I totally didn't see that coming at all. the arc overall took a good amount of leeway, but it all fit well within the confines of the story

These small filler bits make this story so good; add them in whenever you feel they're needed. :)