SoSadLov

1500-2000 words are enough

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I liked the way he started the story, namely with the fact that he played the game, and then got to an unknown place, especially the end of the first chapter is quite intriguing, in general I think the plot will be interesting, as well as the development of the world.

Plot is interesting, and with story writing, it's really good. I've always liked fantasy stories so I hope you gonna continue story. And the idea of book is also good.

Yaho! Too cute chapter!

Thanks for the feedback. Yep, I am trying to find my own writing style. It's some kind of mixture korean and japanese, but mostly korean.

Thanks for the feedback. About mc's past, Im trying to reveal it in future.

Thanks for the feedback. I don't even know the answer to this question myself. Probably something nice? I guess. By the way, any other thoughts? I think it will help me to improve my writing or plot itself

Chapter is good. Not sure about what expect but waiting for new chapters. The setting “Fake Regressor” is new for me, I guess

Most importantly, I can say that I started the story well. Good job. Keep up the good work. The description is done in the same spirit, easy to read. And also there are some points where u are using 3 point view and and then moving to first one. But you skipped the few introductory chapters how it started. So It was a sudden scenario