Came back to try to keep I writing🫡 hope u guys like it, if not then oh well 😘 C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C

No harem at all, this is mostly about football. Why would you add a harem to the story it would just mess everyone up

WHY WONT U UPDATE, BEEN WAITING 10 DAYS!!!!!😭😭😭 pllsss

Just curious but how does Fujin look like?

I always come back to this story to see if u would ever update it or post another story. This was the fanfic that got me into reading a whole bunch of others even tho it’s only like 25 chapters, it was a great story. COME BACK TO US PHANTOMINIUM 😭😭😭

Fuck nah, I’m telling you. Drop the supernatural and powers shit and keep the story with the Mc being sent back to 1912. And how he would deal with everything that would go on in that time. Ur concepts are great even ur other fanfic but the way u try to add in all this other nonsense just fucks everything up.

Tbh kinda surprised that the story is going well, he’s not op, doesn’t have a system, not chasing girls, and is actually trying to get stronger at a normal pace. Randomly found this and I kinda wanna see where this goes. I like it how he was dropped around the start of shippuden instead of years before naruto was even born because most fanfics that drop their Mc decades before the story starts never even get up to the start of canon before fuckin the whole plot up 8/10 for me 👍

* you

I’ve been trying to read it the past couple days but there’s like 7 chapters in revision. Why couldn’t I leave the old chapters and when you’re done, you switch it out for the new ones. I really like this fanfic concept but now I’m just getting frustrated looking everyday to see if u reuploaded the chapters 🥲

I’m wondering when the plot is going to proceed cuz I’m getting really bored ngl Not to hate tho I do like the fanfic but I feel like it’s been stagnant for a lot of chapters

Ay man imma tell u this, I haven’t read it yet but if u do a harem or sumthin imma kill you😤😤 P.s ( pls don’t do a harem, harems always fucks a story up)

PLEASE DONT DO A HAREM FOR YOUR NEXT NOVEL PLSSSS

Ay man it’s all guud, ngl didn’t even see this till now. Just out of curiosity, are u stuck with how you’re going to play out the story or do u not have the time to try to come up wit a plot for this fanfic. Not trying to be rude or anything but I just wanna know ur thoughts if your going to continuing or not with this cuz I kinda liked it 👍👍😭🥹

Why Hinata, let naruto have his girl. any other person is fine but Hinata

I’m confused as to what’s going on, I’m on chapter 5 and I thought this was a black clover fanfic. Are you showing his past? And is he an OC character that you built or is he from a anime or sumthin??? Just curious

AYYY MAN UPDATE UR STORY MANNN, I’VE BEEN WAITING WAYYYY TO LONG CMONNNN MANNNNNNN .!.!.&:&;9:&:’mejdjdjfjfjcjkskejjrnnfnfnndndnd d dnd. D d rn d d djcjfndn j. D

Ngl I was just in the comments to see if this was a good fanfic cuz I never played destiny before but ion know if it’s a good idea after reading this 🫣

Nvm I am disappointed regardless

Ay man when u gonna start a new fanfic or continue one of the ones u have. I’ve been having ur fanfics in my library just waiting if you were gonna ever post a chapter but u haven’t. Pls continue making stories man 😢😢😢😢

I like the fanfic idea, so pls release more chapters 😩😩… .. Z Z Z z Z Z Z Z Z Z Sznznznznznznxnz Z Z Z Z Dnxnxjdmx Z Snd z Z Z Z Z Z z z dhx