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I'm just pointing this out because in most Warhammer 40k fanfiction, the main character always relies on the Emperor or is always subordinate to him, which I find disappointing.

Is your MC going to be a fanboy of the Emperor, shouting 'For the Emperor'? If so, I'd like to know because I won't read it. I've had enough of fanfics like that.

Lol , Adam and Eve too much force like literally MC become a teen for some reason because of that first look I mean become out of character. atleast rosalie have more sense because author add how she view MC when they meet for the first time there some back stories why rosalie pursue adam while the adam and eve moment seem luckluster and seems force nothing to back up why mc like her in the first place .

So you already decided. what's the use of the Pole vote if you don't even follow the reader choice next time don't even propose something useless it's a waste of time. Your excuse is bullshit why make a list when you already decide the FL? When you don't even plan to change it from the first place. xD[img=recommend]

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yeah imagine being ntr in the face because issei is pervert to the max xD.

LOL his deal is for nothing danzo isn't even a hokage yeah he can try stopping it and if succeed great if not then I've tried i fulfilled my deal haha .

why did you remove the harry potter flash forward?

he became Simp when it comes to natasha what a waste.