MIR_Devalanci

Instead of making so many novels why don't you try to put more time on this? Like a genuine suggestion man. you are the author so you can do whatever you like. But it could've become more popular if it was a little fast paced. Right now the pace of the story feels too slow. Even though we had so many chapters the progress for the story doesn't match the amount of chapter we had. My personal opinion is that the pace of the story should be sped up or the amount of chapters released regularly should be increased. And i am fine with any of that.All of those are suggestions at the end of the day. So you can do what you feel ok with.🙂

What the hell is fan voting to determine the result...?? It will destroy everything wwe stands for.

Bro this story Could've been so much better. Instead of seeing a dominating once in a generation talent. We are getting average daily wrestler. He is lacking the aura. And the plan of a faction is so stupid. Even in the faction he isn't the world champions. Such a big disappointment.

One on the worst novel. It got so much rating because there are no other cricket novel available ...............................................................

Shittiest chapter in the whole novel. It just made the story go from 4 to less then 1 star.

ok review bomb was too strong word for this. but what are you gonna do though? You don't take kindly to threats? so what? Not going to accept that you messed up you own story? not going to accept that you don't give f to your regular readers? Here is thing bro the best thing you can do for you is to delete my comment. Why? Because you are the one who is profiting from this story not me. Just go around the Wn and see how many stories lost their value just Because the author thought he is THE Guy. We readers can just move from a story to another but writers can't. it's hard for a good idea to come up with and writing a story around it. So accept your mistake and be humble.

kill oliver and aliyah please. i want him to try doing suicide after all those depression.

if they all die after so much then this story doesn’t make sense. By the way what is the motive of this story? What effect does mc have in everything? It sometimes feels like author is writing anything he randomly thought when he woke up from sleep. And sometimes it feels like q story with well connected plot.

There is no way to keep absolute peace. Either you follow hashirama or madara style. Either way after that powerful government steps down or dies everything will return to as chaotic as it was.

We didn't get to see his stats after the timeskip