Raylen2222_Hunt

I gave on the story it was great but the Mc character and personality is just not to my liking the world where he went to genshin impact ruin any hope I have for.this story and I won't go on to details because it's a waste great job on ruining your story.

why don't you let Noah go to savage island they are having issues with resources and their strength. it would be a good place to go with the metal their to, and with the wild animals, they would be safe.

will kenshin come back to the ones he love?

it was a great story overall, but it's just stepping beyond boundaries of some a human should have mass killing, experimenting on living and non living, etc. when theirs so many better options for a genius. and his personality is just not my cup of tea. that's all but it's a good story.

mate it's nukes that thing you miss he isn't just worried about his family but millions unless you want a nuke blowing up next to you

great story just waiting for more to come

you should grant Cao Cao a skill that involves stamina because his still human and the fights he will be involve with he would need it and that includes if the man has a harem

I'll give this book 3 stars for all I want in a story. at first it was going good, but after it started going downhill. for the title lazy system it really doesn't apply to me since the host or Mc is doing this work left and right like his fight with the Evil dragon was good but could have been better and should have focused on training like I don't know a training montage because if the guy wants to be with Yasaka he need strength and power I feel like people forget this when writing story about DxD that might makes right.the other stuff is fine but needs more work. as for the sharing or telling people his powers I get its good to be honest on some stuff but I felt like he should have kept most of his power and magic a secret like his Dragon slayer magic or his Universal breathing techniques. since what's the point on having trump cards when you show them left and right like it's a piece of candy. theirs so many threats on DxD that I don't know why the Mc/Author forgot or not just mention it like his he stupid or wants to be killed. the world has beings that can destroy countries or the world and his out their playing school boy plus his human still is he? going to turn into a Dragon or what will his race be since if the man is going to get together with Yasaka who can live for as long as she wants the man needs to turn into something that has long life span. I get the Sage mode or arts will give him a long life but for how long? exactly it's a good story but he needs process, and theirs this hint of naivety that I don't like about stories the guy knows his in a dangerous world but doesn't improve him self more and get that needed strength so he can be lazy.sigh sorry about tye ranting all and all it is a good story needs work here and there but yeah so keep up the good work

mate it's my first story I am still getting the hang of it you can't expect someone to write a book that has no grammar mistakes.and I am writing it when I got that idea I am still getting the hang of it

thanks for the Support.