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Mah_olliva

Mah_olliva

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2021-08-01 UnidoGlobal
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  • Mah_olliva
    Mah_olliva6d
    Comentou

    dropped?

    Ch 4 Viagem
    The Walking Dead New beginning
    TV · Demonilusion
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  • Mah_olliva
    Mah_olliva7d
    Comentou

    Does he go to some X-Men timeline, to get the celestial technology that Apocalypse uses?

    Ch 609 [2008]
    Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard
    Livros e literatura · LazySageDao
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  • Mah_olliva
    Mah_olliva10d
    Respondeu a Swikong
    Ch 7 Chapter 7
    Superior Reed Richards
    Anime e quadrinhos · Arcane_Eso
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  • Mah_olliva
    Mah_olliva10d
    Comentou

    Alchemical item and potion ideas Reading glasses (increases field of vision + reading speed) Pen (while mp can automatically write whatever the user wants) Record Book (automatic sheet creation + automatic subject classification + can extract user thoughts to create images or drawings) Memory/Hyperfocus Potion (memory increase + focus increase) Sense Potion (increase of 5 senses) Potion 6 feeling (increases sensitivity to energies + increased instinct)

    Ch 22 Gearing Up(chapter 22)
    MCU: as an alchemist
    Filmes · Bulale_Abali
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  • Mah_olliva
    Mah_olliva15d
    Comentou

    Thanks for the chapter, looking forward to the next one

    Ch 4 4- On the move
    TWD: The protean
    TV · ScarletQC
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  • Mah_olliva
    Mah_olliva16d
    Comentou

    Thanks for the chapter, looking forward to the next one

    Ch 3 3- Awakening 2
    TWD: The protean
    TV · ScarletQC
    detail
  • Mah_olliva
    Mah_olliva18d
    Respondeu a LORD_ASHURA_

    What will be the plot of wizards and muggles, specifically if you are going to come with the talk of equality and unity of species?

    HP: The Sorcerer Supreme
    Filmes · LORD_ASHURA_
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  • Mah_olliva
    Mah_olliva22d
    Comentou

    Did he do automatic farms?

    Ch 21 Chapter 21
    I Only Want to Enjoy Life But My Little Sister Want Me to be King
    Livros e literatura · Fangrove
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  • Mah_olliva
    Mah_olliva1mth
    Comentou

    Come back author, we need ff of TWD

    Ch 4 Viagem
    The Walking Dead New beginning
    TV · Demonilusion
    detail
  • Mah_olliva
    Mah_olliva1mth
    Comentou

    The premise is good, it just needs to improve the dialogues which are very robotic and give a real background to the MC, he literally appeared out of nowhere and the Starks are already allowing him to make changes to Winterfell's infrastructure, it doesn't make any difference sense

    Ch 3 Chapter 3: Strengthening Winterfell
    Empire of Winter: Sam's New Dawn (GOT FF)
    TV · Alak_Samba
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  • Mah_olliva
    Mah_olliva1mth
    Comentou
    Ch 9 Hogwarts
    HP&Marvel: Magic's savant
    Livros e literatura · Thefoolwritter
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  • Mah_olliva
    Mah_olliva1mth
    Comentou

    What a wonderful start, looking forward to the next chapters

    Ch 4 Just One More Day
    Fear the Walking Dead: Survive the Zombie Apocalypse
    TV · SrCuervo
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  • Mah_olliva
    Mah_olliva1mth
    Postado

    Honestly it was a little disappointing, I mean it was the author's choice that the mc basically in the first conversation with SHIED said that he came from another dimension and was gifted by someone with his capabilities, it just doesn't make sense for the author to have a careful personality base, that the mc cares about his identity, and the next moment he's telling SHIED that he came from another dimension, and let's not even talk about the mc accepting SHIED's shit, come on man they tried to hack his system twice , they drugged you and tried to steal the omnitrix, do something, I'm not talking about killing others but react like a person who had their life threatened for nothing

    Ben 10/MCU
    Filmes · Shane_Delgado_03
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  • Mah_olliva
    Mah_olliva2mth
    Comentou

    So... he has a lot of money but still has to steal basic electronics?

    Ch 30 chapter 30 function and secrets
    The Big Bang Assassin (The Big Bang Theory)
    Filmes · BlackNilton
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  • Mah_olliva
    Mah_olliva3mth
    Comentou

    I found it confusing, but we'll see in the next chapters

    Ch 1 Death Becomes Me
    Blindly Walking
    Filmes · Roberto_0461
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  • Mah_olliva
    Mah_olliva3mth
    Comentou

    army of house elves, But seriously, it's worth him having some kind of group/organization, I mean if it was just a war between muggles and wizards it would be guaranteed, now HP x MCU, wizards need to unify to have any chance of survival

    Este livro foi excluído.
  • Mah_olliva
    Mah_olliva3mth
    Comentou

    thanks for the chapter. Please don't forget the Mexicans taking care of the elderly, a good addition to the group. Furthermore, the initial recruitment focus should be small towns, as there is less chance of survivors having been destroyed by hordes.

    Ch 4 Merle
    the walking dead with infinite dimension treasure box system in
    Filmes · DaoistpLxjFW
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  • Mah_olliva
    Mah_olliva3mth
    Comentou

    Thanks for the chapter, please continue

    Ch 3 Survivors
    the walking dead with infinite dimension treasure box system in
    Filmes · DaoistpLxjFW
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  • Mah_olliva
    Mah_olliva5mth
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    In addition to what I consider to be common errors in this genre (lack of depth in character personality in general, rushed events in a short period of time) I think what most disappoints is that it's not really kingdom building, I mean the MC just leaves out there dominating territories and plays into the hands of his "subjects" to administer, there is no type of discussion about choosing territory for construction, economic and food problems faced. Basically another "Lord of People" with op mc without any depth in general

    Global Lord: 100% Drop Rate
    Jogos · A Green Bird
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  • Mah_olliva
    Mah_olliva5mth
    Comentou

    please make a chapter with the reactions of the other houses, I mean he decimated one of the great houses, stole his ancestral home and destroyed one of the religions of Westeros

    Ch 65 The Final Solution for the Iron Islands
    Game of Thrones: Path of the Hungry Bear
    Livros e literatura · JManM
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