HabitualChaos
My purpose in writing is to have fun and explore ideas that interest me.
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HabitualChaosa year agoComentouI can't imagine an "ordinary" level 98 Duoluo.
- HabitualChaosa year agoRespondeu a Sumeet_K
Canon
- HabitualChaosa year agoComentou
John seems Tony boss right now
- HabitualChaosa year agoComentou
I feel that, like robots speaking. In the last conversation in this chapter, Tony Stark never could speak like a real estate seller, maybe if was his own house, but he could speak with jokes. If you want him to help the MC, you can include Tony asking for Jarvis to find a house based in the MC cementers. Perhaps you should search about the characters' voices, for writing a voice more similar to each character. Please, consider a positive comment. I wish the best and keep going!
- HabitualChaosa year agoRespondeu a Zetsway
She would use Assembly (-:
- HabitualChaos2 years agoRespondeu a carrotpie
Maybe food and monitoring.
- HabitualChaos2 years agoComentou
I had read "edgy" ashashash
- HabitualChaos2 years agoComentou
Be careful with the pronouns, as Spencer is a man you need to use "his" and "he". Your work is so good, thanks for the chapter! :-)
- HabitualChaos2 years agoRespondeu a mythoscribe
Who is Lana Rhodes? It's an OC?
Este número foi suprimido. - HabitualChaos2 years agoRespondeu a hezjz
Can I clean here?
