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I read the entire novel Shadow Slave, and I admire the way you write. I just want to give you my point of view. Do not make MC too strong too quickly. Give him time to grow and greater risks than the novel to make it balanced. I really like his character, so no comments. I hope you continue and I will support you as much as I can.