Librarian_Heroen

I think it is enough, like, you didn’t even develop the begging of you story, just skip the training and show his abilities with the story progression. Use the chapters to develop the plot, because the idea is good, but the execution, not that much. Readers are going to give up if this continue.

Yeah, but it is anime logic, maybe there are meridians in this world and he could circulate blood through them with some special technique, I don’t know, I just said what was the equivalent of the 8 gates in the real world.

Eh, not that I know, but he come from a martial arts world, doesn’t he?

Forget it, I just read… Shit!

They are called 8 extraordinary meridians in the chinese medicine.

I don’t think Hinata has fellings for him here.

Yeah, he just mentions it once in a while.

Author knows nothing about swordsmanship and fights.

Thanks for the chapter!

I think he is talking about the twelve disciples, lol.