Oxsinus

This is the first time I've seen such a narrative, and there are few chapters, so I don't want to make harsh comments. The novel is good, I hope it continues. The template progression will hopefully be balanced. Because it's not a fusion template of 2 players, it's a template of 2 separate players.

I didn't expect to see a beyblade novel. I was so excited, I wish there was an ongoing series. However, it is a very beautiful universe and very easy to fictionalize, I'm sure a lot of people have watched it. But no one wrote it. I hope someone can write about it one day and I can enjoy reading it.

It's like a manga fiction, I didn't like it at all, moreover, the roman empire is just eyewashing, the subject has nothing to do with rome. Magical and chivalrous, a girl's novel.

I think it's an adaptation of a Chinese novel. I'll be frank, even this would increase by 1 point. If you're writing it yourself, I think it's pretty good, I just recommend going from 1 to 100 a little slower.

ContinuationIt's so bad. I have never felt the weight of a system, moreover, it is a system with its own intelligence. It's a very bad novel. I'm glad it was dropped, because I could leave such a bad novel halfway through.

I was going to start reading, I was surprised. But I'm sure you can do better. Good luck, my friend. Please don't be too complicated, don't get too caught up in reality. It's just fanfiction.

It's ridiculous. Not worth reading. It's as if he's taken a Chinese novel and manipulated it. However, you know, maybe it was a bad time for me.

Dude it just got taller. pills? are you serious?

I saw it and put the novel down. China is already overwhelmed. Indian nationalism never.