The novels premise opens a lot more for development. The writing is very good and is engaging. Hope for more chapters. If you chance upon this novel please give a little time to read this and support aspiring writers. Here to support my bros at chapter 1 of this novel.

I'm surprised this novel has just 2 reviews. it is also free. This novel is unique as the mc is not some reincarnator but just a natural born monster called wretch. His character is that of monster. Though I am still in it's early chapter I hope the mc will remain as a monster and acts as a monster as that's what it makes this novel unique. The only downside of this novel is the grammar and the writing. The writing needs improvement, though I can't comment for the latter chapters if it improves. Because it's free i assume the author writes it for his own. That's why I'll just drop it if it develop into something not to my taste and I'll just leave this review here after reading the initial chapters. I hope the author keeps improving. Overall a hidden gem for non humanoid/monster mc.

The avatar fanfic we deserve. Perfect backstory for a villain with no unnecessary drama. The mc learns from his encounters and moved on as a person. Please continue to update and don't drop.

5 star. No system no cheats just grit and determination. Realistic portrayal of characters. Most importantly have a stoic, giga chad mc with giga chad sons. No simping. Please don't drop.

Yeah like the one reading this

The author did a good job in translating/editing it. I read the mtl after I caught up to the latest chapter and it is as Chinese as it can get. I think I'll just wait for the updates here🙂

the greatest use of a system panel is motivation

Should light and justice fail only lolis and furries shall remain eternal

nice funny chapter 😂

the heroine

I though it was a waifu but it was🐧🐧🐧

thanks for the chapter and get well🎉

Thank you for the chapter the best🎉🎉🎉

I just started binge reading all your novels author and as you publish more fics the quality becomes better and better. At first I was reluctant to read your fics since i have read a lot of bad reviews from your early fics like the siscon one. And when I read it it was really frustrating to read. But after I read the Tokyo scumbag and the mineta one I was entertained since the quality of the fics are really increasing. For me this is your best fic. Hope you will continue to improve in your journey as a writer and please more chapter and don't drop. Thank you author.

This fanfic doesn't seem like a Chinese ff at all. Good job editing it author. Finally a Chinese ff that doesn't belong to chinaverse. The characters talk like proper humans. At first I was reluctant to read this because is really don't like to read Chinese ff cause they talk like they are in some cultivation world. In one ff I read even nick fury is saying courting death. But here the author did a good job editing no more Chinaverse. Also the main character is funny and ruthless and hase same personality as Deadpool. Overall a good fanfic. Thank you author and more chapters please.

Thanks for the chapter. Please don't drop😋

One of the best hxh fanfic. The story is unique with its setting before canon and located at east gorteu. The mc is also not stupid unlike other fanfic and has his own convictions to survive. There is a depth to the story unlike other fanfics which has mc for the fun. Here we have a serious mc and a darker theme fitting for the world of hxh. The story development and power developmemy is also logical and there is little to no plot armor. Thanks for the fanfic. Please don't drop.

Thanks for the chapter👍

Very good chapter. Word are very coherent. Keep up the good work👌