Alfiemooon

hugh and ulf taking the greens side was so out of pocket here. They're not dumb enough to listen to a random whisper. Since Viserys death, the story has been super contrived.

She was the smallest dragon in the dance.

The dialogue is pretty rough. feels so unnatural

I guess Aegon is rather broken, but that was one huge contrivances. Aegon isn't a retard, he knows it wasn't aerion. Regardless of his grief, that was so out of character.

And it's not even a greatsword 😭 the only similarity it has with a greatsword is that it's blunt, and even then it's more like a big hunk of claymore shaped metal

Always hated guts' sword. People are always so excited to see it in novels where it defies all common sense and basic physics.

why wouldn't a water god user be able to block it? 2 parallel projectiles can still be block if the sword was held perfectly adjacent, blocking both with the length of the blade.

when is this gonna end :(

The prose could definitely be improved, you can tell it's written by an amateur, but the story itself is pretty decent.

Despite her talent, she doesn't enter the top 10 strongest🥲