pegasus_z0

Im listening to this in text to speech and the ai read this as “jack democratic”

Ayo?

you are probably long gone by now but at least i tried: delete the novel. write the description again, without any words like w***e. remake the novel. its a lot of work, but its the surest path.

Author, i tried to join your discord, but it looks like the link is too old

I noticed your story does not have many ratings, so I wanted to give you some pointers on how to improve. For one, it's very clear english is not your first language, and you need to go back and edit your chapters. And second, try and read some other novels, like kill the sun or shadow slave, to see how novels on this site are normally written.

One of the gems of webnovel

Oh, is that why he’s selling his stuff?

I like this so far, but it seems like a sports novel. Are there any evil organizations, demon nationa, enemy kingdoms?

That’s understandable. They are all competing for the same role, so backstabbing is inevitable