Night_Fox_

oh my bad.

The story is well-written and the plot is interesting and offers a rather unique premise. This story has great potential. I love the smooth flow and especially the nerd MC and his friend. I recommend everyone to read it at least once.

This is a really nice start with an intriguing world, a clear goal in mind and the plot is looking solid so far. Unique story and characters, had me wanting more!! Excited to see where this goes. I can see the adventure-filled novel here, Keep it up.

Unique story and characters, had me wanting more!! Excited to see where this goes. Author really draws you in with his distinct detailed explanation of the scene. Really helpful with picturing what is going on in your head!

Wow. What a story! Such an intriguing plot, even if this is not my piece of cake. I love the author's style and have enjoyed the novel so far. Keep up the good work and never stop believing! :D

sorry I am unable to find your comment. Can you tell me what you meant?

thanks, I will keep that in mind.

I think you are mixing up Qi with something else. Qi is a type of energy, for example: In a magic type novel, someone is unable to use/possess mana. .

So far this is one of the better ones that I've read from this genre. I'm curious to see where the author takes the story. I like the main character, and I think the author has a good plot and so far it's been entertaining and enjoyable to read. The characters are interesting and the author does well portraying their thoughts and intentions while still hunting that more development for the future. I look forward to the rest of the story.

thanks for telling.