Boltz_Theone

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2021-07-04 UnidoGlobal

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Boltz_Theone3 years ago
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Great so far, reviewing from chapter 8, this is everything I have been looking for, everything is looking OK right now, the only thing that needs improvement is the writing quality, besides that, this is quite good, I very much recommend.
Marvel; Werewolf System
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Boltz_Theone3 years ago
Comentou
Lol great chapter
Ch 2 Trouble already?
Marvel; Werewolf System
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Boltz_Theone3 years ago
Comentou
unique start, keep up the good work.
Ch 1 The beginning
Marvel; Werewolf System
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Boltz_Theone3 years ago
Comentou
earths mightiest hero?
"He is more than an ally, he is earth's mightiest hero but that's just my opinion." Fury chuckled.
MARVEL: GAMER PATH
Filmes · CORNBRINGER
Boltz_Theone3 years ago
Respondeu a Plug_O_Stien
well, it doesn't really matter, but I think you should start showing more detail so that the reader won't feel lost when something happens, atleast let the Mc say where he got stuff from and stuff like that, don't mind me tho, your doing good.
Rex once again nodded in satisfaction and then continued further into the forest. by now it was getting dark and he needed to find a place to camp. soon he found a lake that was just deep enough to let Gyarados swim without feeling uncomfortable. Rex soon let out his pokemon with Gyarados creating a massive splash causing all the fish to scurry away in fright of the massive blood-red Gyarados. Machop was much more sensible as it learned more discipline due to its martial art training. Luckily it was still bright enough outside to have a quick training session. Rex fired up the system and followed what it had provided Rex with. He proceeded to take machop towards the lake and started underwater breathing exercises to increase its endurance and punching while being weighted down to increase pressure. Then he followed it up with footwork drills that boxers do, and then some hand speed work before finishing it off with some weighted exercises. As for Gyarados, it was strapped with weights and began to do laps around the lake. after that, it settled down and started practice its control over its energy since it had a lot more moves it had to make sure that it could use them effectively and efficiently. Machop did the same after its gruelling training and started to practice its energy manipulation again. Rex had of course not neglected his body and had joined Machop when it did its physical workout.
SOARING TO NEW HEIGHTS: Welcome to my pokemon world
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Boltz_Theone3 years ago
Comentou
where does he get the weights from?
Rex once again nodded in satisfaction and then continued further into the forest. by now it was getting dark and he needed to find a place to camp. soon he found a lake that was just deep enough to let Gyarados swim without feeling uncomfortable. Rex soon let out his pokemon with Gyarados creating a massive splash causing all the fish to scurry away in fright of the massive blood-red Gyarados. Machop was much more sensible as it learned more discipline due to its martial art training. Luckily it was still bright enough outside to have a quick training session. Rex fired up the system and followed what it had provided Rex with. He proceeded to take machop towards the lake and started underwater breathing exercises to increase its endurance and punching while being weighted down to increase pressure. Then he followed it up with footwork drills that boxers do, and then some hand speed work before finishing it off with some weighted exercises. As for Gyarados, it was strapped with weights and began to do laps around the lake. after that, it settled down and started practice its control over its energy since it had a lot more moves it had to make sure that it could use them effectively and efficiently. Machop did the same after its gruelling training and started to practice its energy manipulation again. Rex had of course not neglected his body and had joined Machop when it did its physical workout.
SOARING TO NEW HEIGHTS: Welcome to my pokemon world
Anime e quadrinhos · Plug_O_Stien
Boltz_Theone3 years ago
Respondeu a Einstein3
true, let's not make him the Sakura of the pokemon world.
AN: the useless simp brock about to get a beating? who knows, stay tuned and as always leave comment if you enjoyed.
SOARING TO NEW HEIGHTS: Welcome to my pokemon world
Anime e quadrinhos · Plug_O_Stien
Boltz_Theone3 years ago
Respondeu a Shin_Senpai
tbh it doesn't really matter, he said he was going the warrior route but most of what he does now is magic, but oh well.
Two months later after my quest within SHIELD, I decided to start on a new project, yes, yes I know, I already had many projects, the one of me becoming a geneticist, and the one of me becoming a billionaire, but like those two, this project was also very important, for it would drastically increase my chances of survival, I needed, an armor.
MARVEL: GAMER PATH
Filmes · CORNBRINGER
Boltz_Theone3 years ago
Respondeu a Randomguyno1
did you not read?, he has a satellite phone, whatever it is, makes him call from anywhere I guess
"If you let me answer my phone, I can get you that proof!" I growled back.
MARVEL: GAMER PATH
Filmes · CORNBRINGER
Boltz_Theone3 years ago
Respondeu a Xanderix
lol, mistakes happen
"I will in a bit, but first, I need everything you have on Carol Denvers, if she killed a bug and was recorded I want it, ok?" That information would help Carol to understand she was being used, I hoped.
MARVEL: GAMER PATH
Filmes · CORNBRINGER