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I just dont want the author to drop the novel, im a fan of all his other works, i know this will be good too.
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Yes, I plan on editing the first few chapters a bit, so the readers can get more accustomed to the characters in the story.
I really like this book, the amount of detail and attention author put on the characters, really shows that he has this book planed out. I would love to see more chapters.
No, no. There is the girl, the mother and Liam. They are preparing for an event, I didn't specify her coming into the scene. I see.
It's supposed to be a hopeless rhetorical question, they have lived together their whole lives and this wasn't the first time it had happened. He is just asking himself in disappointment and disbelief. But the readers don't know that still, thank you for pointing it out.
Oh, you're right. I should have added a graphical to make it easier for readers to imagine it. It's like a daze, focus and creative light returned to his eyes.
It's an interesting concept, unlike anything I have seen on webnovel. It's original and interesting, the author has found a wonderful way to let us into the amazing world he/she has made.
I like how author is able to describe the scene, from just a few minutes of reading I am already fully immersed in the world he has created for us.
Thank you for your nice words, hope you like the novel.