katsura18

thanks for the chapter, but the previous version was better. this is too much info dump and characters

it's really weird, the system's supose to have only 2 abilities, but then it's a map, an a danger sensor, an alarm and more. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Maybe change the title and pic of the fic. Also scribblehub is an option.

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You're confusing Coulomb with Columbus. The first is a french scientist Who discovered the now Coulomb Law, the electrostatic force(attraction and repulsion) the second is the one Who "discovered" america.

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it's a good one, the only bad it's that only use inspiration from Final Fantasy to the abilities, well considering it's hxh it's not that bad........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

too bad it seems to use things from Final Fantasy

no, Razor

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