TheWanderingBard

Shadow Slave is a captivating story, and I've grown to love it. In my opinion, it's the best WN on the app, as it features amazing storytelling, world-building, and characters that don’t feel bland. This novel has got me emotionally invested, lmao

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Not enough descriptions of the world/setting. Overly sexually female characters, unclear plot, too cliched, a lot of phrases need to be rewritten for clarity, there's an abundance of filler words, descriptions are bland and stale. Use grammarly and a thesaurus to better your writing.

This author has great potential. His plotline is interesting. Grammar is impeccable, it definitely has great potential to be a top novel in the future! Let's the climb to the top together fellow author

Good pacing. There are a few sentences and instances where grammar could be better phrased or fixed. The plot isn't dull to the point of boredom. This novel makes for a relaxing read.

He's not useless 💀. His sister is right there. They're outside. Why go read a book when his sister is literally an expert when it comes to these beasts?

Dope stuff. I look forward to seeing the author improve and where the plot will lead to. The author needs to pace his scenes better and rephrase some sentences here and there but it's already an enjoyable read. Good luck writing!

Plotline is fun and understandable, grammar could use some work, and the world building and descriptions of it could be better but overall, it's a nice and enjoyable read.

The mc has one love interest. Their relationship will gradually build up

Hello, it's TheWanderingBard here! I've 11 chapters stockpiled and will be releasing 1 chap per day(so the updates should be fairly consistent). I hope you all enjoy the read! I'm a new author so if you've spotted any mistakes in my chapters please point them out. I also welcome any feedback/suggestions with open arms. Have a great timeee!