Marvelo_Chido

Laura is an amazing and determined young lady, there's a lot that could be done about fixing her parents marital crisis and asides from her talking to just her aunt she could suggest her parents see a guidance counsellor for therapist I think that could help the character achieve the peace she wants in her family. Nice one tho,it's more realistic and I like that it portrays everyday life.

Nice start I look forward to the rest chapters of the book