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Why don't you try writing a Gundam story, like Gundam OO?

Mc has sex with his older sister. How many chapters???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

Thank you for the answer. And villainous and selfish MCs don't have to be in revenge novels. I like Chinese and Korean MCs. who is a selfish villain MC who is half anti-hero. At least when I read it I wasn't annoyed with Virgin MC. Even though I don't like China. I have read up to chapter 22. And the Virgin MC in this novel is not my style. And the kind of harem I like doesn't exist. I can't go on. Keep fighting, author. You would be a good writer. You can respond to comments well and quickly. But this just isn't my style. (English is not my first language)

Virgin?

I would like to ask a question about this novel after reading 7 chapters. And before I read any deeper into this. 1)Is this a virgin type MC or not? From what I've read, there are 7 chapters. The MC from this novel made me feel like the hero from the anime Shield Hero. At first he was looked down upon by both the people who were summoned together. from native people and other people and thought that he would become a dark hero But later on, I saw other people struggling. So I put myself and my loved ones at risk to help those who used to look down on and bully me. and taking risks to help villagers who are not related to them until becoming a virgin hero It makes me curious to know what kind of MC this is. I will then decide whether to continue reading and support it. 2) Is there a harem? Come to a different world, a world where power and strength are judged. The laws of the forest are far from the laws of order. If you don't have a harem, it's a shame.

Coming to chapter 8. After knowing and reading the criticism about MC's stupidity, I was sure that MC is stupid, has no brains, no plans, low intelligence, and bad luck, so I stopped reading here. This novel has an interesting skill. A story worth following But there's rubbish in there. Stupid MCs are a type of MC that I hate just as much as virgin MCs, and are just as annoying. I guess this MC is just as stupid as the Infinite Mana MC. That's enough of a wake-up call. energy of endless mana I intended to keep a low profile and not stand out, but after 2-3 episodes had passed because of my own stupidity. Until being able to reveal his talents to the city lord And then the governor Forced to join the group and backmailed, this MC is probably stupid too. I think it's a waste of time reading stories with stupid MCs.

Ok

Chapter 22 I Can't Go On Anymore I found this fanfic 2 years ago and at the time it only had about 50 chapters. I read it until chapter 50. And I really like it. Unfortunately, the script was too small, so I shelved it, and 2 years later, I'm now reading it again. But in the recent past, I've read dozens of Douluo fanfics on both Chinese and English websites. I can say that I know the information so well that I feel like I can write this fanfic. And when I came back to read it, I found many things in this fanfic that irritated me to the point that I couldn't read my favorite fanfic that I had been stuck on for over 2 years. Problem 1) A pair of wuhan or more could be had if they were of a similar level, such as Tang San's Hammer and Grass. His hammer was already top level. And his grass, although it looks ordinary But it had the bloodline of the Blue Grass Emperor. It can be seen as a youthful version of the Blue Grass Emperor. And with a little reinforcement, it can evolve into a Blue Grass Emperor. and BB Dong's The two spiders were also top level, but the MC's had 2 dragons and a normal handkerchief. It's not even close to the same level. And why must there be two dragons? If you were to transform into a giant dragon You will have a lightning dragon on one side and a fire dragon on the other. It doesn't look good at all. If you have 3 Wuhan, you can have 1 beast or powerful creature, 1 weapon, and 1 buff weapon. It looks better than 2 creatures that you have to switch between. Because like BB Dong She used the first Wuhan for climbing and attached the standard ring. And use the second one, attach a 10,000 year ring to show the ultimate power. But two dragons…..sigh. Problem 2) Spirit bones. Why are you in such a hurry to attach 1,000 year old bones? Did you know that once it's stuck it can't be removed? Even if you get it, it's difficult and difficult. And it wasn't necessary. The skills that were attached didn't wow me, and in the future I had to hunt down 100,000-year-olds. Matching bones and rings are better than random bones from nowhere. Problem 3) The story about chicken soup that there is no Wuhan is useless. There are only useless users. When I first heard it I thought it was really good. But when I read a lot of fan fiction, I felt like it was nonsense. It's just chicken soup for fools. Because the Wuhan level is related to the innate spirit level. If it's a type of grass Useless things Most have no spiritual power at all. You can't even begin the path of power. Even though he only had a little spiritual power, Future levels are limited. Unless you're lucky or have enough money to buy fairy grass or something similar. And if you were to choose a god-level Wuhan with full spiritual power that no matter what path you choose to walk on, it would be godly. And Wuhan is useless with only 1 soul power. and must calculate the best route But even the best routes have many limitations. And it only makes it more powerful than similar or mid-level Wuhan.

Ning rongrong?

I don't understand why there are only writers on this site who write thriller novels. Whether it's F level, but when it dies It comes back to life and awakens its power and slaps you in the face. Or fall into a hole and wake up slapping you in the face. Stuck in a dungeon and wakes up and slaps you in the face. The family was bullied and woken up and slapped. This family had an ancestor who was a swordsman. But all the heroic heirlooms have disappeared and live under the bridge. When there are hundreds of thousands of people looking down on you. Wake up your strength and slap me in the face. To be honest, I don't think I could write in a good style as I was born comfortable and have all the looks and backgrounds. If I had untapped abilities and powers I was born with a lack of ability. But I am a low level or nothing person. Waiting for a friend to stab me in the back and awaken me and slap me in the face? Boring (English isn't my first language, so)