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It's just that he's so stupid that he's mad, Danzo only picks up people he can control by some means, and if he can't control them he kills them, but you let Mc develop, and now he's Danzo's dog... why didn't Cjandl adopt him? He was a 4-year-old boy and he brainwashed him, I don't know, let's wait until everyone knows him and has knowledge and even the Hokage brings him into the mkre and that Danzo has him, we'll say that a ninja from the sand came in and I took children to a ninja village and no one found out. Better said, let's be more mediocre and let the MC lose his common sense and scream like a total 3-year-old child, it's not like you're reborn or transmigrated, he's 5 today, and tomorrow he'll be 39.

It is assumed that Danzo, after he orchestrated the assassination of the third Hokague, was prohibited from having roots and from having orphans or Konoha ninjas. From that moment on he stayed still, later Tsunade was even firmer. Secondly, he was taken from his home, kidnapped and domesticated. The mc meets Danzo, he acted mature throughout the saga, Danzo appears and screams like a five year old child.

It is supposed to be ten cones and kiras, against 11 soccer powers at the world level.

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He is a reborn, who has memories, they ask him to act with women and he refuses, the system promises him a thousand things and he refuses? But he repeats that he wants to be stronger more times, he acts like a 5-year-old child who had a piece of candy taken away from him.

Furthermore, I see that you match the characters in physical limitations. to give more tension to the script, which contradicts itself (not just strength, I'm talking about resistance, power and other elements), and you can use Kira to exploit his physical capabilities, let's say if Nagi jumps, it's easy to tackle him, or gain position . It seems like Kira is a bunny who doesn't use her strength.

The chapter is interesting, I liked it a lot, but it's very op, I mean, Kira is normal, your system, now everyone reaches Kira??? You mention that it is flow, but everyone reaches flow, measure the power levels, it is getting out of hand, professional players will look like children, and if you change it it is because of the script and not because of the game.

The whole fix went to hell with your Danzo technique, honestly it's the biggest script I've ever seen. now you can give him the power of an otsusuki and goku's ki, and it sounds believable.

It has improved a lot from chapter 1 to 200. I hope to read more stories 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀

What happens is that the author is a fan of Naruto and he knows that Naruto has 300 filler chapters... so he says let's make filler, filler a story and create meaningless stories while I reach 1000 chapters.

If you are going to be a marine, I hope it is logical, not that he is a marine and kills celestial dragons because he feels like it.

The worst was to make him a marine, because in the time of piracy he must be a marine, besides, what is the D for.

those pokemon nicknames gamesz, if you use the nickname put the name of the pokemon next to it.

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I think Lucario was missing a couple of attacks. He has very few.I think he is missing, supersayayin god, sphere of maximum power and destroyer of the ethereal world of the sparkling blow.

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Middleweight, Light heavyweight, Heavyweight. I said he have a system, he can go to the rout of the terror

Play guitarra is hard. I play since 12 years and i said "six years wasnt enought to pratice"