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I don't want to be annoying, but I've already had several chapters where the content is isolated and without a story to follow, I don't know what happens, or how the story progresses very well and there is little character development, because it focuses on other things... The quality that has always been there begins to drop a little.

Why Sebas? Sinnoh, alolah, what about that?

It is worthwhile for you to do it, as long as there is nothing exaggerated, nor do you take the concept of zun stu to the extreme. I would like to see how the Uchiha clan develops and how you add people to the equation, let's say Amazon Lily, but you can add Shisui history, with Robin or Nami... just do what you have to.

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I think you're exaggerating Danzo a little, it hasn't even been three years and you've already branded him as a villain, Root was created in the second ninja war, and Danzo fell into darkness when he felt useless.

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Is colombian and said yao plays in tickets...

I red the history... Of another autor.

Charlize

I think it would be best not to add too many things from other animes, that is, just enough touch. In addition, you can promote different shinobi fields, such as medicine, swords, puppets, taijutsu, and poison design, focusing on the talents of the village. to certain areas, and there is the exploration of keki tota and the breeding of chakra animals, they can be special to the sand design, such as scorpions, meerkats, coyotes, vultures, yellow lizards, kangaroos. improve natural defenses, they can create sand storms at certain times, or animals under the shadows