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Haha holy crap! I tried to savor this for as long as possible and read really slow. Another month 😭 When you were writing the plot were you thinking "How can we quickly move on to the new world? Montage? Time skip.... No, no, let's just blow his brains out!"
For nearly plagiarizing another work (The World Online & The King's Avatar), it is ironic that a large percentage of each chapter is just the author asking you to not pirate his work; as if someone who would actually post the work on other websites wouldn't do a simple find/replace to get rid of the notice. The fact this is a clone of The World Online & King's Avatar, the irony is clear. I believe there are racial aspects at play here as there is some animosity between Japanese and Chinese writers, perhaps the author doesn't humanize Chinese authors. Lots of missing words which completely changes the intent of a sentence. One has to extrapolate the author's meaning from the rest of the paragraph. The characters are also shallow. The premise is great as it was copied from very successful works. My last gripe is that such a large part of the free chapters (and presumable the paid content) are just author's notes.
If you think about it, they're right about not breeding out with muggles Not only is that a strange fetish akin to pedophilia (wizards can easily control muggles as if they're children), but magical potential is clearly genetic. They're using "blood purity" in lieu of having a scientific understanding, doesn't mean they're wrong. It's qualitative over quantitative with very close conclusions.
Why are all novels/fanfics about egalitarianism and equality? We can see how much that failed on Earth but for some reason we export it to our fictions as a virtue to aspire to. Are all of the rocist/realist books banned or something? I don't see how trying to dilute power by giving representation to goblins and giants is beneficial to humans. That's like lions giving hyenas all their food. Reminds me of the insanity of the 1960 legislations here in the USA
Bring back Goldstein, make him and his father friends with Epstein.