Fearless_wolf

I have a little solution. Shortly: Her name is Shiro 😇

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I wonder how the author will explain this "science"

Black Tech my mate...

It is a book with an interesting narrative. Although there are three or five small details that disrupt the flow, they are not that disturbing. It's just that the time jumps are not a good alternative way of moving from scene to scene. I would have preferred a little description of the journey. I wish you success! Write lots of chapters, okay?

[InsertNameHere]: usage affects the fluency negatively, my friend.

It's an interesting first episode. If the future episodes are as interesting as this one, it seems like it can reach good places.

So if you bring democracy to this magical medieval world, you get a huge amount of points...

Go Henrietta! Slay that witch!

A book devourer