TheUnsus
My motto for storytelling is.... First time reading, it's great. Second time reading the story, it's damn amazing!
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TheUnsus14dRespondeu a Hardy1jCh 12 Quite.... a Violent Threat!- TheUnsus14dRespondeu a Faier
Then I'll make sure this story is so great, your last remaining brain cell is able to make a review regardless. And all you'll say will just be. " Amazing! Insane! Original! One of a kind! Addicting storyyyyyy!!!! " ....Something like that. XD
And if we look at all the 4 reviews.... yea, you guys were definitely not happy with the current speed. - TheUnsus14dRespondeu a Novelreader12333
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And if we look at all the 4 reviews.... yea, you guys were definitely not happy with the current speed. - TheUnsus14dRespondeu a Black_Eyes140Ch 12 Quite.... a Violent Threat!
- TheUnsus18dComentou
The worst she can is no Her:
The woman met his gaze, and after locking eyes with Yang Huo for a short brief moment, took her eyes away, and responded in a tone devoid of emotion. "Yeah... it is." - TheUnsus18dRespondeu a Hardy1jCh 12 Quite.... a Violent Threat!
- TheUnsus18dRespondeu a Hardy1jCh 10 Host! Don't bully a woman please!
- TheUnsus18dRespondeu a Black_Eyes140Ch 11 Unpredictable Woman
- TheUnsus18dRespondeu a Black_Eyes140Ch 11 Unpredictable Woman
- TheUnsus25dComentou
what kind of crevice allows you to venture for 6 years XD
"Six years. I toiled six years in these dark strips of hell. But it wasn't enough. I failed." - TheUnsus28dRespondeu a Hardy1jCh 10 Host! Don't bully a woman please!
- TheUnsus1mthComentou
Yes, I'm aware that there's no blood on her clothes. And believe me, I tried really hard. But the A.I is unable to separate tears from blood... and I don't think any of you want to see face covered with blood right?
Caught off guard, she stood frozen, her face a mask of blankness, unable to express the tumult of emotions within her. But then, in a trembling whisper, she uttered, "Yang... Huo...?" - TheUnsus1mthComentou
and then he was ambushed by the bandits and died unjustfully. end of story.
Alone, with only his horse for company, he headed towards the morning sun, and faded into the distance. - TheUnsus1mthRespondeu a wajoli_zako
i would like to double it and give it to the next person!
Eighteen years old: You have broken through to the Seventh Grade Realm and cultivated both skills to the third level. However, you discover that relentless cultivation is of no avail and this small town can't provide any help in your cultivation, so you decide to leave. - TheUnsus1mthRespondeu a Dreyerboys
- TheUnsus2mthComentou
thats... not true at all, a simple google search completely disagree with this. It's in fact quite a well known, niche fact, that you can grow muscle with just visualization. but i think it is mostly used for improving skill rather than actually growing muscles
In fact, scientists have already debunked that no matter how hard the brain activity in VR was, it wouldn't affect the body at all. At least human muscle mass wouldn't change just by lying down and exerting their brain a little bit. - TheUnsus2mthRespondeu a Black_Eyes140
You've made a good point. (Sorry for the long response. TLDR: I'll take note of it) When writing chap 1, I did consider making the MC super weak and rely solely on his intelligence to succeed. But as you can see in chap 1, I rejected the idea cause Yang Huo isn't nigh-omniscience. He's just exceedingly good at understanding people's desires and using that to his advantage, so strength is still necessary. In fact, the MC wants to train now (hence he's gng back to his room rn). Don't worry, I won't abandon the power system, too much potential to leave out. With proper setup, you bet the MC will wring out every bit of it to make smart moves. This is a fantasy world after all. I would have gone for realistic novel otherwise. However, mind games will always be a core part of the story, but I'm aware that constant politics can be exhausting. If there's constant politics, the MC needs to keep churning out insanely smart moves, and no way my brain can keep that up. After all, in chap 1, the System wants the MC to flex against other smart characters, so I better deliver on that XD. (Quality moves > Quantity moves) But regardless, I admit I didn't think this through enough, so I'll take note for sure.
Ch 8 A Letter Is All You Need