Hey guys, shameless author here. I know this book is just at it's early stage, but I... I would appreciate every feedback however it comes. that's how I know I'm doing the right thing. My books is pretty much out of place on a platform like this one. I know that well enough. But I'm trying my best, to make sure it's enjoyable. It's not the usual fantasy stuff, still, I'm trying... Really I am. Sleepless nights, everything I'm sacrificing to make sure this book is something. But I can't do that without you. I need your feedbacks. I need to know I'm doing it right. Please. I may and may not have cried writing this review.

I hope you enjoy it 😊

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Okay, okay, I’ll admit it—I’m shamelessly diving into this. But hey, here’s the scoop: this book, it’s been my obsession. When I kicked things off, it was a bit like trying to walk on stilts—awkward and wobbly. But hang tight, folks, 'cause as the story goes on, it smooths out like a well-worn path. I’ve dialed down the fancy writing for a smoother ride. So, I’m asking for your patience. Trust me, this story's got layers. It’s a wild journey, and I promise it gets better. This plot? Oh, it’s a beast! A rollercoaster of twists and turns that'll leave you spinning. Buckle up, 'cause we’re in for one heck of a ride. Stick around, and let’s dive into this adventure together. Golden_Essense [img=recommend]

Understood

I appreciate

I appreciate

This is a work of art.

Hehe

I appreciate, I really hope you'd actually give my book a chance.

Sure, I already like how it started and I'm willing to continue. I also, I'm an author, I don't know if you remember my book: Strength of Chaos. I'm hoping you could continue reading while I do the same here. I promise to give honest reviews.

You kind of ruined the mystery for us here

LOL. Thanks please point the error out I'll appreciate

Maybe you could just point it out so I can fix it please

Thanks i really appreciate you taking the time to read my book. This is actually my first book, and I'm always trying my best to make it better 😌

The chapter had been edited, please read again. Arigato

I promise you, it gets better. Pardon the grammatical errors.