OrdinaryRandom
Hello my name is, Random. I'm an author. Is there anything else to say?
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OrdinaryRandom5 years agoRespondeu a Ian_Gopezwell, keep writing and read more books
- OrdinaryRandom5 years agoRespondeu a Athena_Amor
I Became An AntiHero
- OrdinaryRandom5 years agoComentou
Wanna review the swap? I'll read and review your novel and you can read and review mine? reviews need to be honest
- OrdinaryRandom5 years agoPostado
It's a hot mess, do not read this don't even try you won't be able to. Grammar is none existent. I would've recommended that the author use Grammarly but I doubt that it could help. read some good books author.
- OrdinaryRandom5 years agoPostado
All you lack is writing quality, apart from that you have everything. Myah seems like a good character although his design is quite feminine ;) Keep up the good work. I've read 3 chapters till now and apart from the grammar, everything is nice.
- OrdinaryRandom5 years agoComentou
Myah's background is tragic, and his uncle betraying him is even more tragic.
- OrdinaryRandom5 years agoRespondeu a Traenson
I think that's what he's doing... no offense author.
- OrdinaryRandom5 years agoComentou
dude, you can't describe stats with "Average" it needs to be a number. just don't add a system if you're going to write average
- OrdinaryRandom5 years agoComentou
A demonic-looking angel? yeah right
- OrdinaryRandom5 years agoComentou
Hey! your novel doesn't have any reviews. Mind if we review swap? I'll review yours and in exchange, you can review mine. if you don't want to just delete this comment.
