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Awesome!!!!! I just read 2 chapters so far, but the writer’s way in describing scenes is awesome. And also the cliffhanger in each chapters made me wanna read more👍🏻🔥

Oh no! I ran out of Power Stone! I'll come back tomorrow to read more and give the power stone! this book is worth more than only Power Stone, actually! The writing style is awesome! I could imagine all the scenes moment by moment. Great job!

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OMG, it's just the opening...

The novel has a great world design that is described clearly so the readers can imagine it easily. The story is engaging. I can't wait to read more. This novel got my collection and power stone, and it absolutely worth more than that!!!!!

I do really love all the names of characters and the world you made

Thank you for the sharing. Before this, I chopped the paragraph but I find it feels too many ‘enter’. So I put some sentences together. I will try to balance it. As a reader, how much sentences in a paragraph do you feel the most comfortable enough to read? And if you aware, I mostly put direct speech first, then the explanation. Do you find it hard to digest? I love to find a reader that I could talk to, so I can improve my writing. Thanks a lot for your suggestion. I do really appreciate that🥳

Thank you, I do really appreciate this.

Vote, Add to the Library, and Read this novel will make your day! The way the author leads our emotions is pretty good. I'm about badmouthing the man from the first chapter. lol... Having the world designed as the one universe with the first book is a good move. It makes loyal readers try to read both books.