Vipex_Puka
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2021-06-06 UnidoGermany
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Vipex_Puka3 months agoComentouNice Name. PS. it's also my name
- Vipex_Puka8 months agoComentou
I really like the story so far, but you could Break the big paragraphs into more smaller ones, like maybe 5 or 6 lines, maybe a bit longer if it fehlst better to read, makes it smoother to read.
- Vipex_Pukaa year agoPostado
I really like what youve done with this world
- Vipex_Pukaa year agoPostado
Its a shame that you re-write, but at the sme time Im excited
- Vipex_Pukaa year agoPostado
really nice ............................
- Vipex_Pukaa year agoComentouEste livro foi excluído.
- Vipex_Pukaa year agoRespondeu a General_Kenobi_0
A Chaos Demon from Warhammer
- Vipex_Pukaa year agoPostado
I've seen a few mistakes here and there, but overall, this is my favourite work here on this site.Keep going!
- Vipex_Pukaa year agoRespondeu a romeotango148
He chose right with a kid like you
- Vipex_Pukaa year agoRespondeu a romeotango148
Bro, that's just disrespectfull.Why does your Dad not look for another woman, that's not as ugly and old as your mother huh?