EdgeLord_23

desciples*

isn't it supposed to be MJ

It's a nice read and has a lot of potential. Mc develops a lot of bad qualities like thinking of people as friends but not putting in the effort to develop that friendship (Always looking out for what he can get). Let's say for instance trying to give skills that's useless to him to his friends. And Mc should also try and stick to a legend path. Throwing Fireballs as a son of poseidon, feels weird. By developing a legend as Son of poseidon, I mean focus of water abilities and sword techniques, develop relationships with others that have connection with sea. Use darkness magic to enhance water attacks. Let the legend develop as a story like. after Percy conquered the underworld he developed an affinity for darkness magic. I know I am probably not making sense. It just feels like there is no direction for character development and there is no hope for side characters to get abilities eventhough they are supposedly the mc best friends. And it can't boil down to Luke because he was a red flag friend from Start with everything read by mc in his status. ps. I enjoyed the story up until after fight with Elsa.

Thanks for the chapter. I love the development for Harry. Just when I thought it couldn't get better you prove me wrong⭐️

Great idea/picture you are trying to build. I love the characters and the powers they are getting, and thinking of what characters would do with their abilities is exciting. But this story loses when it comes to development, everything seems rushed. And loses a lot of the tension in characters developing an ability slowly and starting of mid and getting better as the story develops. I have a lot of hope for this fanfic and that it would be great if author decides to further expand it. So far enjoying the creativity, thanks👌

Thanks for the chapter. Great read👌🔥

what happened to the gloves?