I'm just a living teenager trying to figure out what to do with my life. There are so many options to choose from and I hope I choose the right one.
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First of all the synopsis was good. Short yet intriguing. The characters are well defined but not too described. The entire plot is magnificent. I love how in the action scene you used the right adverbs and words thus not making it cringy.
NICE READ It's so realistic though it's fantasy
Jason and Jennifer. Siblings with names that start with J
He loved a good chase. That's the phrase I love
Thanks for pointing that out.
You're right. I'll correct it. Thanks
Your comments are making me be more consistent.
Thank you. I really don't know why I'm just seeing your comments just now. Thanks for your support.
Ur right. Say hello to Nailah
It's written in the present tense