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No you literally threatened to Kill his whole Clan a few hours ago and used the sword from Mommy to show you could do it, and Leng Yue's defeat of his whole army with zero effort.
I am so confused.. He literally did exhibit power beyond reasoning to them, and they all begged him to bow down to Li Wei... Now you are writing like they can't understand why he is defending Li Wei... This makes no sense in the story after just hours ago he bowed to him to keep him from killing the whole clan... And how Leng Yue defeated his whole army and stripped them naked just like that.. What is the reversal of the minds of Chan Xi and everyone.
OK I went back and Fyr never said what the mission was so this was the first hearing about the flowers. The way Azreth was talking just before that about sending another group after her I thought she was sending Fyr,Eve,Leora,Tessa, and Felita. I even thought sending a lower level group after her was strange.
honestly gender is mixed up so much in the story I don't think readers care at this point. But using male now would help the scene.
I thought their mission was to find the little girl who ran away as usual.
using "yeah" much better than "I know". than you.
Or just "Force the transmigrator into the same person he is replacing"
Really.. Even a Moron knows when you send your protection to "Scout the area" you stay the F#%@ put and don't run off to some other spot. Like the commander sending his army to scout the area, then walking in some other direction and running into the enemy army.
and it was their first time :(
so the missions filled back up quickly after they cancelled all missions after the Demon, the bandits, and that Elder was using them to trap disciples.
yeah the twins have changed hair color so many times over the story.
One thin I like is right now each girl has their own key role in the group (Hong Ye is new and TBD). Huan alchemist, Ling guidance and training, Mingyu overall understanding, Cui for buffs, Min Chakrams and the prisoner girls leader, Yi long range damage, Rui spear and long range protection, Zihqui formations, Zihyan and Mengi close combat, Niwei high damage output and helping Mingyu..