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From what I have read here, the book is extremely good A totally refreshing Idea with the way Vampires and Hunters have been portrayed in this novel. It isn't exactly reincarnation either, since Chris underwent an experiment of some sorts with his own free will. Kudos to that point. For the people that are wondering if the book is worth a read, I would definitely say it is, due to the way it is penned and strung along together. Though I also have a hunch that the readers would want more, so for the binge readers, I suggest you be patient. The pacing of the story is neither too fast nor too slow for me. There might be people who will prefer a little slower or faster, but I feel the blending is a good mix, taking us between fast and slow, keeping the shifting barely noticeable. All in all, a good book to read, and looking forward to more chapters in the future!
Alright. I found this chapter a little lacking. The element of surprise is there at the end, but the tension that was supposed to be there as he was searching for the meaning of his life was a little lacking. Could have done a better job there. And the anger that he had expressed that he was helpless could have been done in a much better manner. The emotion was shown very slightly, whilst helplessness and anger should have been stressed more there. A good read. Keep it up!
A really well penned chapter. Way to go The blending of the imminent danger and his situation was perfect. And the ending cliffhanger is neither too rushed nor too lacking. It's a perfect drop, in my opinion. To the next chapter
Okay, my thoughts on the first chapter. It has been well paced, the beginning and the mystery surrounding the perpetrators have been portrayed well. Will need some fixing of Grammar and a re-read will allow you to find some omitted words in some paragraphs that your eyes might have missed. All in all, an extremely good start.
So, to begin my review, I would love to point out here that this author has made this book into a work of art. The artist 'BrewingFantasies', has always been a master at mixing some adult elements into the story seamlessly, and they seem to have done it again, only this time taking it up a notch, further indulging me, the reader, into the depths of this world, the character, the tension of the situation, every word has been strung carefully together, woven as smooth as a fabric of silk. I hope the author can keep this up! Great work, keep more coming! P.S.: For anyone considering reading, definitely do!
A well done job indeed
Kind of, yeah. You'll find a lot of similarities, but there will be differences as well. Be ready
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Thank you! Will do and try not to disappoint you!
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