Drsanders
Hello There. 23 PSN:Sanders4808 Big novel reader Music Enjoyer
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bro is a menace, thats sexual assualt
god she just keeps screaming and crying
suchlike?
not sure if even author knows.
haunt- should be hunt.
seems to have misspelled the name again. aquira?
"it indicated ashera." Bad grammar here. The whole paragraph needs work on the wording and grammar to make sense. my only understanding comes from assumptions as to what the author means.
seems that the name of the character was misspelled to ashers?
also didn't notice, but groin is misspelled
strange wording, such as "sire" and "quacks" it reads confusingly.
confusing introduction
slight mistype with the "such a lady" the comma and space are incorrect.
cliche, im falling asleep
"i will reach the peak even faster" "i will take my time".....
boring... the journey is most of the fun. when it comes to "knowing the future" it almost always becomes a collectathon, just checking things off a list to become stronger and getting those opportunities endlessly. what is the motivation for him to need to be stronger, why does he want to be the best in his past life?
lame. i hate these things where there is clearly a op class but its justified because it's hard to become or exclusive etc. it somewhat negates hard work or other things that make a protagonist special. it also makes no sense that anyone would be fine being a mage when sword mage is all that and a bag of chips. sure its good for solo but it clearly would be amazing for team play, unless for instance it has some class exclusive passive like "too proud to party" since its strong.