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Great novel, story line has been developed well as plot constantly changing and evolving. perfect balance between development of characters and introduction of new characters.

it's good but you need to improve upon spelling

great novel

Why an umbrella?

thanks

By the way Draken_Phenix are you male or female as it may affect the plot or story line and I can develop it in different way's

Guess who's the character coming next chapter he just want's moooooorrrrrreeee

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I thought id make you into a phoenix who always want's moooooorrrrrreeee

i made a character for you Draken Phenix hope you like it sorry if it isn't ok yet