I would really be glad if you could tell me the name of the novel . because I can't find it in the MTL 🙂

I would give this novel 1 star . that's how bad it is. an stupid MC who is adults but don't act like one . act like 10 year old kid such a stupid thing that make me so angry that I want to say hey author don't you dare to write a Spiderman story anymore with a mature and smart MC when you don't know who how to make MC really smart .

I would have given it 4 star. but MC is forgiven person . so it's not for me. I like the MC who will pay back a teeth for teeth .

to slow . don't read if you are having a bad day . it will surely make your mental peace lose , you know what I mean . to little chapter . I don't recommend you to read this unless you enjoy MC who goes to suffering every moment of his life without a happy moments and dump MC .

I must say it's a hidden gem . I would have given the author five star . but I am very disappointed in his chapter uploading speed . so it's 4 star 🐸. author I really liked your this fan fic . so don't drop it .

dude seriously I like this fanfic of yours. but your chapter uploading is very slow. upload 3 chapter by week or 4 if possible. your already losing many readers . seriously if you have done kept stable chapter uploading then you will earn more vote man . and more readers ♥️

Author we all can agree on one thing. 😌. we want more 😏 more more

i agree bro 😇

well the plot is very confusing. one second ago he act like adult then next Chapter he acts like kid. very confusing. thats why i drop it. cant figure out how mc lose his adult mind and be a 5 year old kid

I usually don't give 5 star in reviews nowadays. because I can't find the gem I am looking for. but you my friend , fellow author . you deserve it . this 5 star review. I liked this fanfic of your so much . keep it up . this kind of novel is so rare this day . a truth gem with a colorful diamond .

so far so good man keep it up . I like this fanfic of your great start with MC background and experience . with enough detail to understand what is going on . keep up the good work . ,

a good novel with a good smart MC that knows how to get the job done . very well written so far . the story is very good . . so this is my first review. it will can change after 50 chapter. if the author can keep the story like it is then my review will stay the same. a good novel for those who like a smart MC .

if you don't want to read an stupid MC . who have an op system but don't know how to use it probably . then don't read this. this will just make you very angry. for the new reader . you can read it. but for old readers avoid it . massage for the author. you should make your MC smart and don't force plot . your plot is very very forced . I hate idiot MC.

logic is not an best thing in this novel . MC is novel reader. and don't know how the world works . waste a lot of time . etc. to chose the right skill he could have done it in first day instead he did it when everyone one die. truly an work of art. but for me this is an shite art. where realistic thing was so force that . this novel plot all are force . MC is totally idiot. even as an modern person . he don't know the danger cold era . lol truly an smart author.👍

fucking shite that's what's its the novel about....... same old same plot . no change . it's would have been better if the author can make whole different thing . instead copy some one else work basic and apply to his novel . it's feel like totally copy cat tyoe

really like the story . but helpings the girl in bus . is kind ya lame to me. . it like quit force you know. instead you could have done that MC saves the beauty in last moment. also give some point why he have to save her or need her there when you try to save someone. otherwise most reader's in webnovel will give you an tons of comments. like why did you save her dude. why your MC is so naïve. etc . man I hope you fix it. which you Did in chapter 8 and 9 explain why he need them . but that's way to late. most readers don't have that kind of time to waste on . but few do . anyway your work and idea used in this novel is very good .

shite Chinese urban fucking shite novel 🤬🤬🤬🤬. just ruin my mood . god damn it . I wish who the hell the author wrote this just drop his writing as Carrier. fellow readers don't read this thing. I warned you . this will kill your mind and soul . to make you so much angry that you want to kill the man who wrote it. ...........................................

so good man I love it. I want more of it. ............................ plz update chapter faster ..........................................

pretty avarge Chinese urban novel . .......................... I hate Chinese urban novel ....................................... ..........

..... well done well done man bravo . ✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧.... 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉 finally some good fanfic . keep it up bro don't drop it.