carlos_boral

Lol forgot to change accounts

Story gets boring fast I came here for the action and the use of black bolt power but it hasn't happened 20 ch in. While yes it makes sense for the mc to train and avoid using that power. But c'mon I came here for black bolt power. It's like on of those stories where the mc has a very strong ability that he doesn't use even when he's about to die and use martial arts instead. It's like having Gucci clothing then not using them in a important meet up bruh why do you even have it you ain't gonna use it

I mean black bolt has telepathy but the mc will probably gain it at 20 yrs old

This good especially when you have watched pokemon as it brings back nostalgia and isn't really as boring as other pokemon fanfic that takes place in the pokemon world since you probably know the flow goes if you ever played a pokemon game

Tis was disappointing I thought I gonna be reading about a Cybertron god adventure but I got soyboy virgin with the power of a god. Tis reader is very dissatisfied

Please continue translator san

Sad hades didn't marry Persephone and it's harem. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ..

So does the mc grow a dick I mean kryptons tech should be able to do it. if yes then I'm in for Yuri. . . . . . . . . . . . . . ... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

Well first this is a rewrite and this one goes to the topic of multiversal scale and this one has also insta op mc i mean he goes from human streamer to a god in the multiversal scale tho not the most powerful still top tier. And i guess it also somewhat a hentai/comedy now?? Kinda disappointing since the previous version was better tho it kinda had a rough start

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