Cloudthief

to alter the appearance of his abilities. We’ll see :) And as for making people think he got an ability a little late. He could try, but It would be difficult. If you're not affected by the artificial infusement by the age of 10— it basically means the x-cells don't work on you, regardless whether it'll be later in your life or not. Though, nothing is absolute, he could be the first... or perhaps there are others that are buried under a blanket of secrecy? :0 Nah idk, but his thinking is that he doesn’t wanna attract any negative attention from the big fishes, he’s still pretty weak after all. Thanks for reading!

Will be mentioned soon though! [img=recommend]

I mentioned his level before in the dormmate chapter but never his actual ability, as Lachlan never chose to appraise him.

It's a beyond interesting concept with good world-building, characters, and story-development. Only problem I have is the quality of the writing. The vocabulary is great, It's just the diction which doesn't poke me right. If the author fixes those small mistakes then I bet this story could become a great one! All the best luck to your author!

Sorry for the late response, but I'll answer now! The uploading schedule isn't set in stone, but I'll try getting a new chapter out every week, sometimes even a couple more if I'm able to. As for the pace of the story and the growth of the mc, both are pretty normal In my eyes, but I guess It would be considered a little bit quicker in others. I try to speed it up a little bit, but not to the point of where the story gets dull or the world-building and characters at the side get thrown away. Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it! [img=recommend]

Sorry about the delay! my editing software stopped working two days ago and I'm trying to get it fixed before sending out a new chapter. Hopefully, it won't take too long. Once again, my apologies.

Really appreciate the review, It means a lot. As for the uploading schedule, I'm inclined to agree. Even though the chapters are longer than usual, It's not an excuse for my sporadic release schedule. Sorry, I'll definitely try to improve on that!

From what you wrote, I agree, It's a little bit rushed in the forest past. As for why he went back to the orphanage instead of going somewhere else, he still considers that his home and was unaware of the 'time-skip'. Also, a wrongful impression you might have, the MC wasn't actually 'killed' in the orphanage but at the school, which is why he didn't go back there. If he did I would definitely add more exposition. But you're right, In the future chapters, It won't be as rushed as it was in the 4th, I can assure you that. Thanks for the constructive feedback, I really appreciate it!

I really like the dialogue in this novel. it really feels like I'm actually there and listening to their remarks and seeing their emotion. Very well done. the grammar, vocabulary and structure it's on point and I'm really looking forward to more of this author. Surreal work!

Novel is well-written, has great vocabulary, and awesome structure. as I was reading I could imagine the scenes that the author conveyed through detail. looking forward for more from this author!