Hydra_Gairum

Pls don't make the MC op.

Author a point to be noted: The story is quite interesting but you are dragging certain slice of life chapters a lot. Like the previous one. Wasting one whole chapter on just explaining the room and stuff is not commendable. I would recommend you to split up your paras more and shorten the neighborhood for the plot pace to pick up.

Hey author, can youmake the chapters a bit more lengthy?, the story is very good but is held back by how small the length is.

excellent story and good concept but does it have any kind of romance

" Unless you Know what the numbers mean you can't really do anything with them" - Entrail_JI That was a bit funny pardon me 🤣🤣.

Bruh whats with the power scale?? I wanted to ask this for a long time but how was he level 19 and still without any spells at the start of the series. And if his rate of progression is quite fast then why did it take him soo long to learn the spell??

What If Julien uses the strings as his defense, (bcoz he said he lacks em) you know like how John Smith (eminence from shadow) used to fight against Alpha.... Idk just my opinion but thought it'd be cool, what do u think author??

We shld get more of Leon and Julien moments, it's kinda like reading best frnds quarrel 🤣

That will shortly come. Although the field examination chapters were a bit offside from the plot, I deemed it necessary just to show the dangers lurking outside the slums. Now that the filler is done, the plot is going to return to its original place. Hv planned smn quite interesting for the concrete door part, hopefully it turns out well

Thank you....