Spirit0090

okay, how many times is the word "unspoken understanding" going to be used? like in this chapter, I have read that word like 5 times. if I read that shit one more time, imma imagine it like them having s*x in their mind or some shit like that.

why tho? it's not like The Grandfather gives a shit on how he was raised. he himself mentioned that he wants to train the MC, so any and all mental blocks the MC could have formed in the orphanage could be removed, like being shy, heartbroken, sad etc.

u didn't read the synopsis huh? go and read chapter 1 again, especially the last words

okay, I feel the MC being dumbed down a lot. this is a criticism that I would like the author to address hopefully. 1) The MC is supposed to be a scientist but he is jumping headfirst into situations without thinking, like Him attacking Scorpion without analysing him. even his basic intelligence is gone out of the window as he is wearing a Mask that is Registered to Him, which could be easily traced back. 2) Why is Felix even here? he is supposed to be a scientist, NOT a Spy, NOT some kind of good Hand-to-hand Fighter. that was supposed to be spiderman. as I am comparing him a little to Peter, I feel that Felix is taking unnecessary risks. 3) after Meeting Maria, why does Felix seem..a person who can be pushed around a little bit. for example, Yelena and Kate sneaked into his home and started making a mess out of it, but there is literally no comment on that except him thinking " they wouldn't find anything anyways" or something like that. even Emma Frost dragged him into a Meeting and he came without arguing. 4) why is he doing these Spy stuff as HIMSELF? i get that There are things that Spiderman can't do, but Why is Felix mingling with Spies and stuff? 5) and how did Emma Frost Come to the conclusion that Felix is spiderman, when she didn't even See Spiderman during the empire State building attack iirc? all she saw was Felix, and that was for a couple of second, but other than that, She DIDN'T meet Spiderman tho? I hope the author will answer my questions, other than these criticisms, I enjoy the story.

dr octoavius is a lady in this fanfic, not a him.

vegeta came to existence on Jan 7 1989, AFTER JOJOs.

sure, he could 'get' away, but that doesn't change much. light is still the fastest.

black lightning is also armament. Oda hasn't properly divided the effects of each haki imo.

it was never stated that way. they might have awakened it earlier but never went all out like they did in Punk hazard.

no it isn't. light is the fastest.