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A Real Review for Those Looking for Someone Who Reads Novels Outside This Mostly Terrible Website I'll start by saying that if you've read a lot of Korean novels, you might find this one to be just a copy-paste job. The characters, the world-building, and even the way the plot unfolds all feel like they're taken straight from other stories. So, in my opinion, it's not worth your time. Now, about the protagonist—he's the type of guy who, if you stand by his side, will give you 90% of his fortune. Why? Because he blindly trusts that no one will betray him due to his family background. Even the most despicable villains just roll with this, which is incredibly stupid. Another example: the protagonist gives a person he just met the most precious golden apple, and then he confidently thinks, "There's no way they would betray me now since I gave them such a great treasure!" That’s his entire thought process. Another thing—I read reviews and saw multiple comments saying the protagonist is smart. Well, if he's up against a group of chickens, then sure, I agree. Why? Because every character in this novel has the intelligence of a chicken. They get angry too quickly, happy too quickly, and can't think critically like we do. That’s because the author restricts them to make the protagonist look amazing. One part that really made me laugh—at some point in the story, the protagonist hears about a swordsman who is supposedly a genius, so he decides to find and recruit him since he's still in the early stages of his journey. But guess what? When he finally finds this "genius swordsman," it turns out to be a girl! LOL. I'm pretty sure I've seen this exact scenario multiple times before. Another major issue is how dumb the characters are. Literally, every single one of them barely thinks. This novel is just another cliché story filled with face-slapping young masters. If you value your sanity, don’t waste your money on this. One last thing—the world-building. I’ve read over 40 chapters, and the author still hasn’t explained what this world is like. How does its power system work? What about its politics or military structure? We know nothing! Everything is vague, probably so the author can shape the story however they want. As for spelling and grammar, the author is decent, but they often forget to use quotation marks for dialogue. This makes it really confusing, and you’ll sometimes struggle to figure out who’s speaking. Final Rating: 2.6/5 – Below Average.

Dear author, there are some dialogues where the characters speak without ".." Can you fix this? It is confusing and lowers the rating of the novel.

Hmmmm

It's better to have the main character blend into this world while maintaining some of their unique traits.

Can you delve deeper into enchantments and breathing/meditation techniques? For example: The protagonist used a meditation technique and successfully inscribed three magical symbols. I don’t want brief explanations like this—details add depth to the story. Also, can you write a plot about the protagonist’s family after the protagonist succeeds in reaching an official wizard? This is a scenario that no *WMW* fan has explored before. For example, the wizard could help the protagonist’s father with a small portion of **his** power, allowing him to climb the ranks and become a noble backed by villains. Additionally, the protagonist could accept students from their family—not out of care, but merely to grant them a chance to step into the world of sorcery.

NO

There is a problem I found, which is that we do not know the current time in which the events occur. Can you arrange how much time has passed since one of the events or the actual beginning of the novel?

Do you plan for a long life or immortality for Hardy, since Hardy has somewhat of a superpower, I think of a vampire scenario that I find very appropriate.

The disease of loving attention is truly terrifying

There is a better scenario for you, which is to control the army and military force in the shadows 《like the reality we live in》. It will save you a lot of time.