Background is great. Writing quality is noteworhty. Story development is solid and tension is there. Plot is creative. Characters are great and the dialogue is superb. The world background seems to be solid and well fleshed out. Good job.

I have high hopes for this since I genuinely like your other work too so I would like to read more into this. Also, the characters seem really interesting from the get go with personality and nothing like NPCs to progress the story, except the few in the beginning

This book is severely underrated it has good grammar, an interesting plot, and it is a good thing to see an mc that picks the right choices. Please don't drop this it will probably get more attention.