I got all the way to the interlude. We'll, the story is definitely not for everybody.

Thanks for the chapter

What an awesome chapter! Thanks Author. 👍👍

Thanks for the chapter.

Alright, thanks for answering

Mind if I ask what made you read my review?

Lol yeah.

Author... I salute you.

This is honestly a good story. But seeing the protagonist get constantly compared to everyone else and the people always highlighting his weak points is really tiring to see. It's understandable if it was the first impression, or before he was making waves in Dorne with his groundbreaking ideas that were being implemented. But why does it need to be repeated everytime that he is not the most handsome among his friends? He is not the most strongest? He is not that good in bed?? It's just annoying to see at this point. The worst part is, the people that keep on highlighting his weakness and lesser traits are his family. If it isn't something that is particularly important for the story, such as progression of romance with his future queen or something else. I think it's better not to keep on repeating the same thing.

Thanks for the chapter. Welcome back, Author.

It's time...

Galactus got One-Shotted wth?

Great Chapter.

Thanks for the chapter.

Does this happen to be dropped?

Thanks for the chapter. Also, happy Mother's day!

It would have been better not to have taken the totally suspicious bribe... Well, it's not primarily the MC's fault considering the many others that got bribed as well.

I think the chapter lengths are just fine. I think it's better the more word count you have in a chapter, but it's better to limit it depending if you will seperate some chapters into parts. Overall, you are doing great.